AUGH I set myself up for a double date by accident but oh good they're bonding over the end of the world crisis averted. phew. Having a great time and thinking about this game in my sleep.
p.s. did you want feedback about typos and stuff, and hows the best way to deliver it if so?
Alright! Some may be me misreading things but here goes so far! everyone else look away from spoilers
-intro, 'purfume'
-Walking with Sinner in the woods, 'segway(tm)' instead of 'segue', either a word (probably 'hand' or 'arm') is missing in the bit where she puts it on the tree.
-Quest for In Light of the Seventh. Simmer and sinner might need swapping?
Anyway for such a large amount of writing, its remarkable theres only so few typos (though getting clobbered with one right out the gate is a bit heheh)! Its all Ive found so far. Lovin the game and the weird offputting ladies therein.
Hiya, back with a few more. Sinner's Apartment 'hans'-> 'hands'. Lady Moonshine 'in't' accent or typo? Eiffel Table purchase, 'slither' -> 'sliver' Exploring Bluehills 'cities' -> 'city's'?
Still having an amazing time, good laughs as well as oof gut punches. <3
Are the game mechanics gotten into anywhere? Like what causes successes/ fails, can you improve your chances, etc? I cant see anywhere to put on my silk kimono to improve my drama!
The choice you make at the very start will boost success in one stat throughout the game, and choosing specific options can make checks easier or harder (having a hammer makes breaking a gate easier, not being annoying makes it easier to convince the weapon to give you a plank etc)
I also found one in the scene where you are playing board games with The Weapon it says, "Do we every interact with each other in this game?"
Also I don't know if this was intentional but after writing the war story for the Pulp Writer as my last action for that day, the next days I was never prompted to give it to her (when I reloaded and didn't write the story i had the option to go apologize to her). Do you have to turn in the story the same day you write it?
I ran into this weird glitch where it kept repeating the same dialogue, I reloaded the auto save and it went back to normal so I have no clue how it happened.
Incredible. Hit too close to home. The scene with the biker butch and the pulp writer at the parade had me grinning and clasping my hands together like a gay dipshit. 10/10 goty
Loving the game so far and this might be a really stupid question, but how do I save the game? I know autosaves work but I have no idea how to do a manual save.
This one's going to stick with me for a while. It's funny, heartfelt and unflinchingly human. I love weird and offputting women, especially the Pulp Writer <3
I've finished this game multiple times now, I've done the Sinner route and the Pulp Writer route and wow!! I love it so much! Kudos to the devs, this game makes me so happy
Also if anyone has any advice on how to get with the butch biker, I'd love to hear it... I want to kiss all the girls...
Question: I'm curious about streaming this. The CWs for nudity and sexual content worry me ever so slightly. Do you think that's a big deal, or am I fine?
This is one of those special games I’m gonna be thinking about for a long time. Heartfelt and sincere and also very very funny, I highly recommend to all gay animals
Hi hi, this game looks awesome and I can't wait to play it. However, I've been having issues getting the linux version to play on steam (though it works fine when you just launch it from the file directory) and I was wondering if you have any advice for any launch options that'd get it to work? If not, I'll just wait until I have access to my desktop again to play it. Thank you!
Unfortunately i am not a linux expert and am also away from my pc for a week! Ill see if i can find that out when im back, and I'll chat to the narrat engine dev about it in the meantime in case she can help! Sorry!!!!
I followed your suggestion and did some googling, and it turns out typing --no-sandbox into Launch Options makes it work with seemingly no issues through Steam! Thank you!!
I just did the 'Sinner Route'. What a lovely game! I went into it with only knowing a few images from Mia's fantastic marketing push on Twitter, I had no idea what to expect and I really enjoyed it. Here's hoping I find time to play more.
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I have only played the first day and I love you Nasty Girl
SHE'D PROBABLY LIKE YOU TOO. DANKESCHÖN.
Its so sad she lives in your head rather than being a real live nasty gal!
AUGH I set myself up for a double date by accident but oh good they're bonding over the end of the world crisis averted. phew. Having a great time and thinking about this game in my sleep.
p.s. did you want feedback about typos and stuff, and hows the best way to deliver it if so?
BETTER TO DREAM OF LLRPG THAN TO DREAM OF THE BLADE WINGED RAVEN.
FEEL FREE TO SHARE ISSUES HERE SO THE WORLD MIGHT SEE MY SHAME OR ADD ME ON X THE EVERYTHING APP "BLAZE YOUR GLORY" AND DM MICH
Alright! Some may be me misreading things but here goes so far! everyone else look away from spoilers
-intro, 'purfume'
-Walking with Sinner in the woods, 'segway(tm)' instead of 'segue', either a word (probably 'hand' or 'arm') is missing in the bit where she puts it on the tree.
-Quest for In Light of the Seventh. Simmer and sinner might need swapping? Anyway for such a large amount of writing, its remarkable theres only so few typos (though getting clobbered with one right out the gate is a bit heheh)! Its all Ive found so far. Lovin the game and the weird offputting ladies therein.
LAST ONE IS INTENTIONAL BECAUSE IM KINDA 'WACKY' AND SILLY, BUT I'LL ADD THE OTHERS TO MY PATCH NOTES 'DANKE'
Hiya, back with a few more.
Sinner's Apartment 'hans'-> 'hands'.
Lady Moonshine 'in't' accent or typo?
Eiffel Table purchase, 'slither' -> 'sliver'
Exploring Bluehills 'cities' -> 'city's'?
Still having an amazing time, good laughs as well as oof gut punches. <3
Are the game mechanics gotten into anywhere? Like what causes successes/ fails, can you improve your chances, etc? I cant see anywhere to put on my silk kimono to improve my drama!
The choice you make at the very start will boost success in one stat throughout the game, and choosing specific options can make checks easier or harder (having a hammer makes breaking a gate easier, not being annoying makes it easier to convince the weapon to give you a plank etc)
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I also found one in the scene where you are playing board games with The Weapon it says, "Do we every interact with each other in this game?"
Also I don't know if this was intentional but after writing the war story for the Pulp Writer as my last action for that day, the next days I was never prompted to give it to her (when I reloaded and didn't write the story i had the option to go apologize to her). Do you have to turn in the story the same day you write it?
YA. THOUGH THERE SHOULD ALSO BE A LATE DELIVERY. WILL ADD TO PATCH. DANKE.
I ran into this weird glitch where it kept repeating the same dialogue, I reloaded the auto save and it went back to normal so I have no clue how it happened.
SOUNDS LIKE AN ENGINE BUG! I'LL PASS IT OVER TO DA NARRAT DEV! DANKE.
Incredible. Hit too close to home. The scene with the biker butch and the pulp writer at the parade had me grinning and clasping my hands together like a gay dipshit. 10/10 goty
THANK
Devs are very communist, buyer beware
BUYER BEWARE UR IN 4 A SCARE!!!!!!! THANK YOU FOR THE POSITIVE FEEDBACK FRIEND!!!!!
cool 👍
Will pen a missive to the Director of the Woke Content Registry immediately.
Thank you for your vigilance. o7
What the hell. Thank you for the warning sir
I am utterly obsessed with your game! It is a genuine gift to play. Thank you for making it for all of us to enjoy. <3
GLAD 2 'HEAR IT'!
How can one save in this game :P
The game autosaves occasionally and you can manually save at the end of chapters :)
Is there any plans to add the ability to save at any time? :P
Not currently but autosave should pop off every minuite or so. It has your back
Loving the game so far and this might be a really stupid question, but how do I save the game? I know autosaves work but I have no idea how to do a manual save.
Figured it out 5 minutes a later but for anyone with the same question: You get prompts for manual saves later on
This one's going to stick with me for a while. It's funny, heartfelt and unflinchingly human. I love weird and offputting women, especially the Pulp Writer <3
EXCELLENT TASTE
I've finished this game multiple times now, I've done the Sinner route and the Pulp Writer route and wow!! I love it so much! Kudos to the devs, this game makes me so happy
Also if anyone has any advice on how to get with the butch biker, I'd love to hear it... I want to kiss all the girls...
SORRY FRIEND GHOST MIGHT BE A LITTLE TOO ODD FOR HER, SAD TO SAY
Wait is there no way ):
IT'S HERE
IT'S HERE
IT'S HERE after i got banned from twitter i lost track of the development
Question: I'm curious about streaming this. The CWs for nudity and sexual content worry me ever so slightly. Do you think that's a big deal, or am I fine?
we're going to try n get a stream safe version out soon but I don't know much about twitches rules I'm afraid!
Holy shit this game is so good! Just finished the Sinner route and am going through to play again already. Good work!
GLAD YOU LIKED IT. SHE'S A BIT HORRIBLE!
oh good heavens. will be replaying. got damn.
GLAD TO HEAR YOU HAD FUN
This is one of those special games I’m gonna be thinking about for a long time. Heartfelt and sincere and also very very funny, I highly recommend to all gay animals
GLAD TO HEAR YOU HAD FUN
Hi hi, this game looks awesome and I can't wait to play it. However, I've been having issues getting the linux version to play on steam (though it works fine when you just launch it from the file directory) and I was wondering if you have any advice for any launch options that'd get it to work? If not, I'll just wait until I have access to my desktop again to play it. Thank you!
Unfortunately i am not a linux expert and am also away from my pc for a week! Ill see if i can find that out when im back, and I'll chat to the narrat engine dev about it in the meantime in case she can help! Sorry!!!!
I got it working on my steam deck with Proton GE, don’t remember what version but it was a recent one. Or maybe it was the other way around
also the desktop version is made with electron so if you find solutions online for electron based games they might apply to this one
I followed your suggestion and did some googling, and it turns out typing --no-sandbox into Launch Options makes it work with seemingly no issues through Steam! Thank you!!
This game transed my gender so hard I wrapped around back to being a cis dude, solid work ladies, thank you. :)
Been there
This is a known bug sorry
I just did the 'Sinner Route'. What a lovely game! I went into it with only knowing a few images from Mia's fantastic marketing push on Twitter, I had no idea what to expect and I really enjoyed it. Here's hoping I find time to play more.
Good work, both of you.
GLAD YOU LIKED IT. SHE'S A BIT HORRIBLE!
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Incredible work, ladies.
GET HYPE FOR LOVELY LADY RPG
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WAUW.
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Wow.
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